Close Reading Bingo

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Weakness 6: "...the author uses phrases like..."

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Weakness 5: "Needly are of shine," "adding long glassy highlights," and " Towering volumes of marble and glass."
     - "Full quotations" can't sit all by themselves like a quote island.

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Weakness 9: This gives the impression of a fancy an intimidating lobby.

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Weakness 2: In statements such as “split my heart down the seam” and “felt the longing build in my chest,” Kidd’s diction expresses the emotion that swelling within Lily.

Best Overall Response: http://twilightlover2.blogspot.com/
- Very smooth
- Nice flow
- Couldn't find any weaknesses
- Good use of adjectives